J'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger ou améliorer mon texte pour mon oral d'anglais : I'm glad to meet you / see you again My name is XXX , I'm feefteen
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J'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger ou améliorer mon texte pour mon oral d'anglais :
I'm glad to meet you / see you again
My name is XXX , I'm feefteen years old and I'm living in XXX.
I've got one sister Her name is XXX : she's eighteen years old .
In my spare/free time , I go out with my friends and the weekend I play the guitar in music school .
Now , I'm going to talk about my training course week in Best Hotel :
The receptionist introduced my training course tuto who taught me the job of a waiter .
During all my apprenticeship , I mad many assignments like put the sidebord help in cook and welcome the custumers for taken them command . There is a really contact with the client ... Even if the profession obresved has no relation to what I wanted to do later , it allowed me to have new approch in the world of work .
Thanks for listening to me
I'm glad to meet you / see you again
My name is XXX , I'm feefteen years old and I'm living in XXX.
I've got one sister Her name is XXX : she's eighteen years old .
In my spare/free time , I go out with my friends and the weekend I play the guitar in music school .
Now , I'm going to talk about my training course week in Best Hotel :
The receptionist introduced my training course tuto who taught me the job of a waiter .
During all my apprenticeship , I mad many assignments like put the sidebord help in cook and welcome the custumers for taken them command . There is a really contact with the client ... Even if the profession obresved has no relation to what I wanted to do later , it allowed me to have new approch in the world of work .
Thanks for listening to me
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1. Réponse OompaLoompa
I'm glad to meet you (je dirai plutôt : Nice to meet you) / see you again
My name is XXX , I'm fifteen years old and I'm living in XXX.
I've got one sister. Her name is XXX : she's eighteen years old .
In my spare/free time , I go out with my friends and the weekend I play the guitar in a music school.
Now, I'm going to talk about my training course week (que veux-tu dire?) in Best Hotel :
The receptionist introduced my training course tuto (ta phrase est ambigüe) who taught me the job of a waiter .
During all my apprenticeship, I mad many assignments like put the sidebord, help in kitchen and welcome the customers by taken their command . There is a really nice contact with the clients ... Even if the profession observed has no relation to what I want to do later, it allowed me to have a new approach in the world of work.
Thanks for listening to me