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Bac oral anglais - notion Idea of progress
Voila j'ai mon oral d'anglais dans une semaine pourriez vous corriger mon oral merci d'avance (je ne suis pas très à l'aise en anglais)
I’m going to talk about « Idea of progress ». To begin with, I’d like to state a definition of progress. Progress is the idea that the world and the society can evolve positively in therms of sciences, technology, modernization, living condition, etc. However there are two types of people on earth , those who finds the progress necessary for the evolution and those for whom the progress damaged the man. Now, I propose we look at a question : « The progress is necessary for the evolution? »
I. The progress allows for example of better way of living, better education, the equality or still in medicine . For example who allows women of power to have children while she could not have no it. For example the text B of design your baby explain the implantation genetic diagnosis.
II. But progress cab be dangerous if not controlled or used for bad. In the film « Welcome to Gattaca », science and technology have led to a world without emotions, without values and whiteout freedom. Many debates arise about the progress of science as : « Should parents be able to choose their baby’s gender ? » from an article of the MailOnline. There may be some good reasons to accept, but an ethical problem arises and a larger question arises : Where are the limits of progress ? CONCLUSIONTo conclusion, I’d say progress is neither all good or all bad. Put into the hands of human beings, that knowledge can be used for medicine or great advances. It’s not scientific knowledge that is either good or evil, but the application of it.
(je n'est pas encore fini le I)
Merci
Voila j'ai mon oral d'anglais dans une semaine pourriez vous corriger mon oral merci d'avance (je ne suis pas très à l'aise en anglais)
I’m going to talk about « Idea of progress ». To begin with, I’d like to state a definition of progress. Progress is the idea that the world and the society can evolve positively in therms of sciences, technology, modernization, living condition, etc. However there are two types of people on earth , those who finds the progress necessary for the evolution and those for whom the progress damaged the man. Now, I propose we look at a question : « The progress is necessary for the evolution? »
I. The progress allows for example of better way of living, better education, the equality or still in medicine . For example who allows women of power to have children while she could not have no it. For example the text B of design your baby explain the implantation genetic diagnosis.
II. But progress cab be dangerous if not controlled or used for bad. In the film « Welcome to Gattaca », science and technology have led to a world without emotions, without values and whiteout freedom. Many debates arise about the progress of science as : « Should parents be able to choose their baby’s gender ? » from an article of the MailOnline. There may be some good reasons to accept, but an ethical problem arises and a larger question arises : Where are the limits of progress ? CONCLUSIONTo conclusion, I’d say progress is neither all good or all bad. Put into the hands of human beings, that knowledge can be used for medicine or great advances. It’s not scientific knowledge that is either good or evil, but the application of it.
(je n'est pas encore fini le I)
Merci
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1. Réponse lucas3085
Hello, I’m going to talk about the notion of « Idea of progress ». To begin with, I’d like to state a definition of progress. Progress is the idea that the world and the society can evolve positively in therms of sciences, technology, modernization, living condition, etc. However, there are two types of people on earth, those who finds progress necessary to evolve and those for whom progress damaged the man (formulation à revoir selon moi). Now, I propose we look at a question : « Is progress necessary for the evolution? »
I. progress allows for example a better way of living, better education, fairness, or still in medicine . For example, progress allows women to have children (while she could not have no it) -->pas anglais. For example the text "design your baby" explains thegenetic diagnosis implantation .
II. But progress can be dangerous if not controlled or used for bad. In the film « Welcome to Gattaca », science and technology have led to a world without emotions, without values and whithout freedom. Many debates arise about the progress of science as : « Should parents be able to choose their baby’s gender ? » from an article of the MailOnline. There may be some good reasons to accept, but an ethical problem and a larger question arises : Where are the limits of progress ?
CONCLUSIONTo conclude, I’d say progress is neither all good or all bad. Put into the hands of human beings, that knowledge can be used for medicine or great advances. It’s not scientific knowledge that is either good or evil, but the application of it. (à revoir aussi)