Bonjour pour lundi je dois faire une rédaction; le sujet est le suivant : vous voulez participer à une émission de téléréalité. Vous en parlez à un de vos paren
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Bonjour
pour lundi je dois faire une rédaction; le sujet est le suivant : vous voulez participer à une émission de téléréalité. Vous en parlez à un de vos parents qui n'est pas d'accord.
Pouvez-vous corriger mes éventuelles fautes s'il vous plaît? Merci d'avance.
Me: hello mom how are you ?
Mom : I'm fine and you ?
Me : that is all for now. I would like to talk to you about something
mom: I'm listening
me : I want to participate in the show : secret story
mom: you sure you're okay ?
Me: mom I'm serious
mom : there than people without brain involved in these programs Is a weak emission.
Me : anything this show is too good! It's just that you is too big for you to understand me !
Mom : at your age I was thinking to work and succeed in my life .
Me : my goal is to win this show I will not have to work or look for work I will be the richest .
mom: who told you that you will win? My daughter you are smart do not do that . I'm your mother I know that there are best for you.
Me:I am aware that I will make mom.
mom : no you are naive you are not going to participate in this show end of discussion
me: please mom I'm great . I'm 20 years old I responsable
mom:yes you are right you are responsible: responsible for your choses.
Me : ouff okay mom you win I will not participate in this tv program.
Merci d'avance de prendre du temps pour corriger..
pour lundi je dois faire une rédaction; le sujet est le suivant : vous voulez participer à une émission de téléréalité. Vous en parlez à un de vos parents qui n'est pas d'accord.
Pouvez-vous corriger mes éventuelles fautes s'il vous plaît? Merci d'avance.
Me: hello mom how are you ?
Mom : I'm fine and you ?
Me : that is all for now. I would like to talk to you about something
mom: I'm listening
me : I want to participate in the show : secret story
mom: you sure you're okay ?
Me: mom I'm serious
mom : there than people without brain involved in these programs Is a weak emission.
Me : anything this show is too good! It's just that you is too big for you to understand me !
Mom : at your age I was thinking to work and succeed in my life .
Me : my goal is to win this show I will not have to work or look for work I will be the richest .
mom: who told you that you will win? My daughter you are smart do not do that . I'm your mother I know that there are best for you.
Me:I am aware that I will make mom.
mom : no you are naive you are not going to participate in this show end of discussion
me: please mom I'm great . I'm 20 years old I responsable
mom:yes you are right you are responsible: responsible for your choses.
Me : ouff okay mom you win I will not participate in this tv program.
Merci d'avance de prendre du temps pour corriger..
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1. Réponse cassyaya
ligne 5: in a tv program =>in the show
ligne6: are you sure
ligne 8 : only peaple without a brain get involved ...it's a weak..
ligne 9: everything in this show is great...It's just that it's too big for ...
ligne 12 : I know what is best for you...
ligne 13: I am aware about what I am doing
ligne 15 : I'm responsible.
voilà !!!!