Bonjour, je suis débutant en anglais et j'aimerais corriger mon texte: introduce myself. Merci pour votre aide. Hello! Let me to introduce myself. My name is ..
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Bonjour,
je suis débutant en anglais et j'aimerais corriger mon texte: introduce myself.
Merci pour votre aide.
Hello!
Let me to introduce myself.
My name is ......, i'm .... years old.
I'm from ...... and i live in .........
It's a very small town with little activites.
During the week, i work or stay at home to do my homework or browse the internet.
The evening i go to school. I study computer science.
I'm only son, my mother teaching art and my father work for the town.
I have 5 cousin, there are all boy. F.... is lawyer, D..... is nurse, E..... is musicologist, M..... studi graphics and H .... complete his secondary.
When i have some free time i like cooking. I like also make musique with my computer. Digial Audio worksation ( DAW )I'm a beatmaker for my band "name of band".
I have a mortorcycle it's a Suzuki GSX-R one thousand with two hundred HP. I love to ride with my motorcycle. Sometimes I'm crazy, i wait the night and when the ground is dry i go on the hightway and i can drive over 300 km/h.
je suis débutant en anglais et j'aimerais corriger mon texte: introduce myself.
Merci pour votre aide.
Hello!
Let me to introduce myself.
My name is ......, i'm .... years old.
I'm from ...... and i live in .........
It's a very small town with little activites.
During the week, i work or stay at home to do my homework or browse the internet.
The evening i go to school. I study computer science.
I'm only son, my mother teaching art and my father work for the town.
I have 5 cousin, there are all boy. F.... is lawyer, D..... is nurse, E..... is musicologist, M..... studi graphics and H .... complete his secondary.
When i have some free time i like cooking. I like also make musique with my computer. Digial Audio worksation ( DAW )I'm a beatmaker for my band "name of band".
I have a mortorcycle it's a Suzuki GSX-R one thousand with two hundred HP. I love to ride with my motorcycle. Sometimes I'm crazy, i wait the night and when the ground is dry i go on the hightway and i can drive over 300 km/h.
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1. Réponse svl
❌N'oublie pas les ''i'' doivent toujours être en majuscule en anglais❌
Hello!
Let me introduce myself.
My name is..., I'm .... years old.
I'm from....and I live in.......
It's a very small town with little ACTIVITIES.
During the week, I work AND stay at home to do my homeworkS or SURF IN INTERNET.
The evening I go to school (tu vas en cours le soir ?). I study science ON my computer. (J'étudie la science sur mon ordi, enfin je pense que c'est ça que tu veux dire ? )
I'm THE only CHILD, my mother TEACHES art and my father works for the town.
I have 5 COUSINS, THEY are all boys.
F....is a lawyer, D... is A nurse, E.... is a musicologist, M.... STUDIES graphics and H.... IS COMPLETING his secondary.
When I have some free time I like cooking. I also like MAKING music with my computer.
Digial Audio Workstation (DAW)
I'm a beat maker for my band ''name of band''.
I have a motorcycle, It's a Suzuki GSX-R 1200 HP. I love RIDING my motorcycle. Sometimes, I'm crazy, I wait the night and when the ground is dry I go on the highway and I can drive with my motorcycle over 300km/h.
(Omg sale fou xDD)