Movie /correction Bonjour , je viens d'apprendre J'apprends l'anglais et j'aimerais bien que quelqu'un puisse m'aider et corriger mon essai. Merci pour vos répo
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Movie /correction
Bonjour ,
je viens d'apprendre J'apprends l'anglais et j'aimerais bien que quelqu'un puisse m'aider et corriger mon essai.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I will talk about a movie that i watched today. Events of the movie have taking place during the seconde world war.
German army have maked a machine named "ENIGMA" which allows to send cripted messages and they UK army was triyng to deeat this machine with human brains only. The hero of the move who named Alen did not agree that they can defeat a machine with brains humans. He thought that they have to construct another machine and then they can defeat it.
Thanks.
Bonjour ,
je viens d'apprendre J'apprends l'anglais et j'aimerais bien que quelqu'un puisse m'aider et corriger mon essai.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I will talk about a movie that i watched today. Events of the movie have taking place during the seconde world war.
German army have maked a machine named "ENIGMA" which allows to send cripted messages and they UK army was triyng to deeat this machine with human brains only. The hero of the move who named Alen did not agree that they can defeat a machine with brains humans. He thought that they have to construct another machine and then they can defeat it.
Thanks.
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1. Réponse melve20
I will talk about a movie that I've watched today. Events of the movie took place during the seconde world war.
The German army have maked --> c'est un verbe irrégulier (make-made-made), tu ne peux pas mettre ''d'' il faut que tu mettes ''made'' ou sinon tu le remplaces par ''fabricated'' ou ''constructed''a machine named "ENIGMA" which allows to send cripted messages. So the UK army was triyng to defeat this machine with only human brains . The hero of the movie is Alen, he did not believe they could defeat this machine with only human brains, so he thought that building another machine, will help them to defeat the german army.
je dois t'avouer que ton histoire est quand meme assez floue... tu as oublié de mentionner le titre, ainsi qu le nom du réalisateur et la durée du film. Et avant de commencer raconter le synopsis, il faut que tu présentes tous les personnages principaux avec leurs caractéristiques. Voilà bon courage !