BONJOUR, y'a t-il des fautes dans cette histoire en anglais s'il vous plais: Once upon a time, a boy named Hippolyte, his mother named him because at birth he d

BONJOUR, y'a t-il des fautes dans cette histoire en anglais s'il vous plais:

Once upon a time, a boy named Hippolyte, his mother named him because at birth he did not began to shouted like all babies but whinnied !! He had only his mother as family and asked her many questions about his father, but she always avoided. Very quickly over the years we noticed that it was not developing normally, like any human being. His hair grew only on the long, the center of his head, while her feet was so small and so hard ... One day her mother and him went to picknicker lakefront. Arrived, they settled and her mother decided to walk around the lake, when she saw a horse so beautiful, so great, so attractive .. But chose to ignore it and went to find his son .. But suddenly the horse has started run after her and grabbed her with her hooves and dragged her to the lake, she began to scream. Hyppolite headed immediately to her cries, the race transformed it into horse and began to gallop, he caught her mother in the horse's hoof, very angry Hyppolite fought his opponent to death. After a few minutes it turned into human, and seeing his mother always sad and upset, asked her why she was in such a condition. She replied, "You who always wanted to meet your father."