bonsoir pouvez vous corriger mes erreurs merci d'avance. I'm a very ambitious person, I love success and I refuse defeat. I think it is this urge, this motivati
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bonsoir pouvez vous corriger mes erreurs merci d'avance.
I'm a very ambitious person, I love success and I refuse defeat. I think it is this urge, this motivation makes me the person that I'm today.
Actually, I didn't expect so much success. I knew, I will rich but not like that.
I didn't study a lot. I left school very early.
Yes, mu wealth upset a lot of people in my family, particulary my mother. the fortune made me lose my family, but I don't regret anything.
I dln't help anyone, because anybody helped me when I was deseperate, sad.
This wealth bring me a exceptional confort, thanks to my money, I don't need anybody, I live as a King.
Sur! sometimes the loneliness consum me but I always overcome it .
I want restrict me to India to be the richess man of this country. Not that is not the money that is lacking.
I'm a very ambitious person, I love success and I refuse defeat. I think it is this urge, this motivation makes me the person that I'm today.
Actually, I didn't expect so much success. I knew, I will rich but not like that.
I didn't study a lot. I left school very early.
Yes, mu wealth upset a lot of people in my family, particulary my mother. the fortune made me lose my family, but I don't regret anything.
I dln't help anyone, because anybody helped me when I was deseperate, sad.
This wealth bring me a exceptional confort, thanks to my money, I don't need anybody, I live as a King.
Sur! sometimes the loneliness consum me but I always overcome it .
I want restrict me to India to be the richess man of this country. Not that is not the money that is lacking.
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1. Réponse Ilyas2a
Bonsoir,
Correction du texte :
I'm a very ambitious person, I love success and I refuse defeat. I think it is this urge, this motivation makes me the person that I'm today.
Actually, I didn't expect so much success. I knew, I will rich, but not like that.
I didn't study a lot. I left school very early.
Yes, mu wealth upset a lot of people in my family, particularly my mother. the fortune made me lose my family, but I don't regret anything.
I don't help anyone, because anybody helped me when I was desperate, sad.
This wealth brings me an exceptional comfort, thanks to my money, I don't need anybody, I live as a King.
Sure! sometimes the loneliness consumes me, but I always overcome it.
I want to restrict me to India to be the richest man in this country. Not, that is not the money that is lacking.
Bonne continuation ! ;)