Raconter un très mauvais samedi en 80 mots. Il faut le faire au passé

Last saturday I woke up with a sharp pain on my leg.I tried to ignore it, because I didn't want to cancel my plan of the day witch was going to the beach. When I was in  the water my leg froze so I started drawning but my best friend saved me. Next time I got I pain I should just go to the beach.

J'espere que je t'ai aide bonne chance

c'est grv si c'est moins ?