Bonjour, donc ma prof d'anglais ma donné un conte de fée à écrire il y a 1 mois et je dois le rendre lundi 18/05 et je n'ai pas encore fini et ont dois l'écrire
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Bonjour, donc ma prof d'anglais ma donné un conte de fée à écrire il y a 1 mois et je dois le rendre lundi 18/05 et je n'ai pas encore fini et ont dois l'écrire au prétérit donc j'aimerais bien que quelqu'un me le corrige avec les bon accords svp le voici : One upon a time, there was three princess Sofia, Marie and Amber.
Sofia was very nice, she had got long straight brown hair, big blue eyes and a small nose. She was very pretty and she was 16 years old. Sofia had two sisters one evil and one little evil. Marie was not really evil it was sister Amber which her manipulated. So, Marie had got long curly red hair, a green eyes, a big nose and a small mouth. She was not pretty and she was 17 years old. Amber was the twin sister of Marie, she was very evil.
One day Amber kidnapped Sofia, she took him to the kingdom of witches, it is forbidden for the king and queen have made a contract with the queen of witches. Sofia had discovered that his sister was a witch, but not an ordinary witch sister was the biggest stars of the witches. Sofia was chocked. So Amber
Sofia was very nice, she had got long straight brown hair, big blue eyes and a small nose. She was very pretty and she was 16 years old. Sofia had two sisters one evil and one little evil. Marie was not really evil it was sister Amber which her manipulated. So, Marie had got long curly red hair, a green eyes, a big nose and a small mouth. She was not pretty and she was 17 years old. Amber was the twin sister of Marie, she was very evil.
One day Amber kidnapped Sofia, she took him to the kingdom of witches, it is forbidden for the king and queen have made a contract with the queen of witches. Sofia had discovered that his sister was a witch, but not an ordinary witch sister was the biggest stars of the witches. Sofia was chocked. So Amber
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1. Réponse dilshanirodrigo
Once upon a time, there were three princesses, Sofia, Marie and Amber.
Sofia was very nice, she had long, straight and brown hair, two big blue eyes and a small nose. She was very pretty and she was 16 years old. Sofia had two sisters one big evil and one little evil. Marie wasn't really an evil, but it was her other sister Amber who manipulated her. Marie had long, curly, red hair, green eyes, a big nose and a small mouth. She wasn't pretty and she was 17 years old. Amber was the twin sister of Marie, she was very evil.
One day Amber kidnapped Sofia, and she took her to the kingdom of witches, it was forbidden for the king and queen because they have made a contract with the queen of witches. Sofia had discovered that her sister was a witch, but not an ordinary witch, she was the biggest star of the witches. Sofia was chocked. So Amber -
2. Réponse MIMOLA2014
Once upon a time, there were three princesses, Sofia, Marie and Amber.
Sofia was very nice, she had long, straight and brown hair, two big blue eyes and a small nose. She was very pretty and she was 16 years old. Sofia had two sisters one big evil and one little evil. Marie wasn't really an evil, but it was her other sister Amber who manipulated her. Marie had long, curly, red hair, green eyes, a big nose and a small mouth. She wasn't pretty and she was 17 years old. Amber was the twin sister of Marie, she was very evil.
One day Amber kidnapped Sofia, and she took her to the kingdom of witches, it was forbidden for the king and queen because they have made a contract with the queen of witches. Sofia had discovered that her sister was a witch, but not an ordinary witch, she was the biggest star of the witches. Sofia was cho